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Friday 17 August 2018

Movie Narrative Writing

 One foggy morning there was a little boy named Tom. He ambled to school with his little sister Sally. They were walking and walking down an alleyway. That time Tom and Sally both had tripped over. They said to themselves, “Wow, what a big tree. We should go and check it out.”

They trooped over to the funny looking house and they looked at the back of the gate. There was the tree. Suddenly a creepy terriffying [terrifying] man popped up.

“Ahhhhh!” Yelled Tom and Sally. “Runnnn!”

They were so scared they ran their fastest.

“Ouch!” goes Sally. She had tripped over.

“Oh no!” says Tom.

The creepy man opened the gate. Tom ran back to save Sally but the man was closer. They both cried. The man quickly grabbed Sally. She had cried even more.

The man says very loud, “Stay off my property!

“Ok!” yelled Tom. “Let her go,” says Tom.

The scary man put her down. And said “What have I done. Im sorry he runs back inside.Tom and sally stomping home mum says where were you two.They run in there rooms Tom goes to Sally's room Tom says let's go back and say sorry.Ok says Sally.Tom and Sally walk over to the man's house knock knock no one answers  knock knock but no one answers the door opens fast they looked inside it was pitch black but the man poped out with sharp teeth and sharp claws.The end…...

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