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Thursday 30 August 2018

sheep writing

I was angry at the person that was recording me. I was so stressed because I was being showed

willie writing


The mother sheep followed me along the park picking up her pace and she realized other i was in touching distance of her lamb. She let out a loud low bleat that echoed across the paddock the sleeping lamb listed it’s head and turned towards us before slowly returning to sleep.As the shepp got closer and closer i thought about weather i should turn and run i began to panic was she going to attack me?? Holding my breath i froze i sighed as the sheep as the sheep doged me and run protectively towards its lamb phuu.That that was a close call.

Thursday 23 August 2018

Peephole Narritive



Peephole Narrative







WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas





Using the “keyhole” picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing.





Start writing here:





There was a boy named Jay. He was sitting on a very nice bench eating a big mac. Then a zombie came from behind on the clusty volcano said you better give me that big mac. Because i am starving!!! The boy looked behind and said “here” he chucked the zombie two big macs and a coke. They both looked behind and jay said to the zombie let's jam on fortnite. He opened his

Tuesday 21 August 2018

Friday 17 August 2018

Movie Narrative Writing

 One foggy morning there was a little boy named Tom. He ambled to school with his little sister Sally. They were walking and walking down an alleyway. That time Tom and Sally both had tripped over. They said to themselves, “Wow, what a big tree. We should go and check it out.”

They trooped over to the funny looking house and they looked at the back of the gate. There was the tree. Suddenly a creepy terriffying [terrifying] man popped up.

“Ahhhhh!” Yelled Tom and Sally. “Runnnn!”

They were so scared they ran their fastest.

“Ouch!” goes Sally. She had tripped over.

“Oh no!” says Tom.

The creepy man opened the gate. Tom ran back to save Sally but the man was closer. They both cried. The man quickly grabbed Sally. She had cried even more.

The man says very loud, “Stay off my property!

“Ok!” yelled Tom. “Let her go,” says Tom.

The scary man put her down. And said “What have I done. Im sorry he runs back inside.Tom and sally stomping home mum says where were you two.They run in there rooms Tom goes to Sally's room Tom says let's go back and say sorry.Ok says Sally.Tom and Sally walk over to the man's house knock knock no one answers  knock knock but no one answers the door opens fast they looked inside it was pitch black but the man poped out with sharp teeth and sharp claws.The end…...

Cyber smart Quiz




Today we did a cyber smart Quiz. We learnt about cyber smart.